holy man!
Hey man!
Ur such a man.
Rushing through my vein.
When everything’s remained
Hey man!
Those few minutes is like a star.
Leaving me a scar.
Which pumping my heart reaching the southern polar.
Hey man!
Please shine me on. Again.
*cornydooney
English Teacher
Those few minutes is like a star.
“Those few minutes ARE like STARS.”
Which pumping my heart reaching the southern polar.
“Which PUMP my heart reaching the SOUTH POLE.”
vinnydubidu
Thanks for revising. 🙂